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When I woke up I was in a haunted house and it is pitch black. I can’t see a thing and then I saw a bight light. I think that,s the way out of this creepy house . I,m walking up then I hear a cracking sound behind me. I stop and don,t move, it is a ghost he passes me. Then I see the bight light again I feeling suspicious because it might be a trap. How can i trust the light? I could not see a thing like a fish swimming away from a shark. I go though the door and I,m outside in the daylight. That house was creepy.
I can is you have use emotive words. You have took your time writing your to writ you 107 word challenge. you have done a good job trying to putting107 words. You have made a mistake about those word Mason I,m and that,s and don,t. Mrs Joyce needs to fix’s you mistake with your words.