Hayley
I could hear the fireworks near y house. Then I saw a bright light in the sky. I could hear a humongous fireworks in the darkness sky. I could see the fireworks going in the darkness about to exploded. Then I saw a bright light going to turn in a shape in the darkness sky. I could think of me sitting in my room by myself checking it out how many fireworks going on. I was having big a chat to about the fireworks but it was a no go zone. My friends came so mum said yes you can go so I was happy.
Jake C
I went to this nightmaris hourted house and the I saw a bright light. It was a ghost glowing in the dark with an old lanbern swinging in his horrendous skeleton hand. I had to get inside because I kicked the football through the window. I had to get back because it was my big brothers. He would be infuriated with me. So I rapidly ran home to get mums vacumcleaner. I ran back to the house and vacumed up the ghost after I got my brothers football. And but we next time we played in china on the football oval.
Well done, you both include the prompt in your stories. Hayley you described the fireworks well, and I’m glad you were able to go out to see them to make a happy ending.Jake, I think it was very resourceful and brave to use a cleaner to recue your brother’s ball. Both could perhaps cut down on use of “I”
Thank you for your comment. It’s was true when I said” mum can I go to the frieworks she said on. Thanks for reading my 100 word challenge.
My pleasure, keep on writing.
I have done my 100 word challenge today so you can have a look with the legs on top. Have a great time. I will talk to you later if I have time and you. what do you mean keep on writing?
i mean that I hope you continue to enter the 100mword challenge and also enjoy writing stories.
thanks. we can keep on talking about my stories. I’m a story writer. I will talk to you more today.