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The pitch black and dark and haunted hallway. When suddenly I saw a bright light this could be a bright light to a new unfolded world as I am walking down the hall I feel the dusty walls when they graze past me. I am feeling amazed that there is someone is coming for me getting me out of this haunted house. The bright light was like a new world at the end of the hallway. Just it took me Ages to get to the end because something kept happening. The light was like a train coming to run me over.
WOW! You have put in good effort into this work with all of the short sentences and the great adjectives and other cool things you have done.Remember next time to put creepy pitch black hallway.
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Your story is quite suspenseful, and and your sentences kept me wondering what would happen next. Very good try!
Hi Corey
great 100wc this week you really made the reader want to read more
keep up the great work
From Mia
year 6 Student
St Andrews School
I love it Corey I am wondering what will happen next I am looking forward to your other 100 word challenges.