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It starts in a filthy, pitch black endless gold mine hoping to het out of this airless hell soon! I was startled on what people had to do back then in the good mines. But really I am mainly focused on getting out of this dilapitated mine! I was about to give up but then I saw a bright light that irritated mr for a second! I walked towards the bright light like I was coursed to walk to the light! I was astonished to finally see the light right in front of me. The thing I want to see out there the most is my beloved family!
I liked how you had the character stuck in a gold mine trying to find a way out. I really want to find out what happens when the character goes into the light.
Well done for entering the 100wc Ashton. You have used some really interesting vocabulary, well done. I’d love to know what happens when you walk through the light. Keep up the great work 🙂