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100 Word Challenge Prompt #2
The sun was sizzling and burning bright, so I decided to take a short walk along the beach. I see the gigantic group of people around a shallow spot of sand. I sprint towards them and I see an incredibly fascinating footstep right in my way. I am flabbergasted!!!! Sooner more people come. Reporters, police and animal captures. Everyone feels unsafe and terrified. Our amazement keeps on growing into mystery and wonder. My face is as red as a cherry and I look up in the mountains. Could it be? The mysterious big foot? A shiver runs through me. “WOW”.
Well done Heidie with this 100 word challenge. I really like how you’ve built up the intrigue but haven’t actually told us who or what made the footprint. You’ve used some excellent descriptive words and having some long and some short sentences really works well. Great work!
Thanks for your comment! I look forward to writing another 100 word challenge. I will act on your feedback and write another 100 word challenge which I will be proud of. This program is putting writing skills to the test and using children’s focus to determined writing 100 words. Its a great global project and I’m sure more people will be writing 100 word challenges!