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Water and the Global World
Logan and Bonnie’s Inquiry Question was investigating the purification of water. They have prepared a video about the need to donate so countries and villages that lack sanitised water can live a life free of disease.
I think that your video for water and the global world is amazing! Like I told you a couple of inquiry days ago, I liked your song! In my opinion I think that he video and song was a perfect match to each other! The feedback I would love to give to you guys is to put a little bite more info on your pictures and make to a little bite more easier for people to understand the meaning of helping people’s life of the water crisis! For a example, if you they were going to help you guys, how would they know how to do it! So if you were doing a project related to water related diseases, I think the best thing to do is to add in a saying, saying that ” if you wee going to help the water crisis, pleases go to water.org! In my opinion I think that would be the best way to go! But if you want you can find another website you would like instead of water.org! You don’t HAVE to do what I am saying! You see what I am trying to say is tell the readers where to go if they make a choice to help you! And that thought might come in handy next time you do a project like this inquiry project!