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Snap Shot Writing: At this moment
If you were the elephant seal what would you be feeling, tasting, hearing, smelling and seeing? Write a short snap full of descriptive power language to tell me about your moment as an elephant seal.
A battle-scarred male southern elephant seal at Gold Harbour, South Georgia, in the South Atlantic. He had just fought off rivals to secure a harem of females.
Mrs Joyce where is this?, this is the most unusual creature I have ever seen.You would never find a creature like this in the water or in a beach, well you could but it’s not that likely you would see one because maybe they are scared of humans or dogs or cats or any pet that you may take to the beach!.
I would feel freedom because I am in a big ocean where I can go anywhere. But maybe not anywhere because sharks are lurking everywhere in the big ocean…..
I would also feel obeice. Me being that animal would mean I would have to be flab not abb and besides, I want to be a girl. 😛
I think that the elephant seal has got hurt because I think I can see cuts on the elephant seals head. I didnt know that these actually excisted. Well, I had heard of them before but I thouht they were just rumours. So I learnt something just from a picture! ;D
Hi Mrs Joyce,
If I wasd that creture I would be feeling VERY free because it looks like knowone is bugging him and it looks like knowone would go to such a place! Also the ocean is like a HUMUNGAS swimming pool so you would think it is all yours when your alone! Also if I was that creture I would be thinking to myself ” where is my family” because in the picture there is only that creture and knowbody else! Youy never know what could of happened!